Seriously dude. Extend it to be around 5 minutes, and I'll worship you :D
I am so in love with this song. =)
Great job with it Dan! Thou all of your songs are amazing, but yea... The way how you combined the story into the lyrics is just amazing.
The instrumental part is awesome. No wonder why you love it so much. I like it a ton as well =D
Deffinetly fits the theme you've selected. The introduction was well planned and timed. A bit of soft reverb would make it even better thou.
The brass entrance was well timed as well. A bit plain, but good - I would suggest an brief exit for the picolo, with a 2-3 downotes before the brass hits the first time, but this is only spicing.
I especially like the part at 1-25 and on...
Splendind, what could I say more?
Keep up the good work. :)
9/10 - Resons listed above , most of it are extra to add, not in negative purposes.
5/5 - Deserves a 5. Excelent work.
Respect and best regards
I really appreciate these long constructive reviews/critiques!
Thank you very much, EthernalRain!
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